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editing activity

Editing Activity

1.Because Grace is a vegetarian, she must pay special attention to the amount of protein in the food she eats. That's why, she eats a lot of beans and eggs.

2.When Grace became a vegetarian. She missed eating meat. She had always liked the foods she eats. However , she eats a lot of beans and eggs.

3.When Grace first became a vegetarian. She missed eating meat. She had always liked the taste of it. She can’t imagine eating meat because she has grown to appreciate the pure taste of meatless cuisine, and meat tastes very strange to her. She is happy to be vegetarian.

4.Sometimes, it is very difficult to eat out in restaurants due to the limited meatless choice on the menus ; however , that is changing now with the increase in vegetarian restaurants.

5.Grace is opposed to killing animals. She is a vegetarian and very disturbed by the use of animal fur for clothing.

6. She doesn’t eat meat anymore. She feels better, humane and healthier.

7. Being vegetarian and feeling that she is doing her share to protect animals. She becomes irritated when people questions her motive. Although she tries to be patient with such people and make them understand the value of saving animals , people often just don’t understand.

  

9.10 editing activity

9.10 EDITING ACTIVITY

     1.      Because of a very good diet, Sandra is always healthy

     2.      The commmen cold can make you feel very miserable;therefore, you should stay at home in bed

     3.      Although I’ve been maintaining a very healthy diet, I’ve been sick

     4.      She exercises regularly;consequently, she is in very good shape

     5.      With excellent nutrition, a generous supply of vitamins, a lot of rest and plenty of exercise, you can                 have healthy life

     6.      Not only is medicine important when you’re sick, but also taking care of yourself is, too

     7.      The relationship between body and mind is very interesting

     8.      Many doctors like my doctor charge very expensive rates

     9.      The magazine that I read is about how to increase longevity through better life

     10.  The sun shines my window, so I have my plants in the window box

     11.  I heard about an acupuncture clinic which also has a specialist on herbal medicine

homework

#1: Our beagle loves to hunt. When someone opens the back door for her, she barrels down porch steps into the yard and runs back and forth across the lawn in ecstasy. Her nose cruises the wet grass for smells such as, smells of cats, rabbit , and other presences too subtle for human detection. She sniffs and spins her tail in quick circles. After spinning clockwise , it spins counterclockwise. These two activities always occur. They are sniffing and spinning and seem to propel her along.

Although the Government Printing Office in Washington D.C. is a source of much useful information, few people know about it. It is the official publishing house for the federal government. The GPO publishes pamphlets and books on a vast number of subjects ranging from the dangers of X-rays from home TV sets to the identification of mushrooms. About 27,000 publications are offered through the Superintendent of Documents, many of which are inexpensive. There is no charge at all for some.

#2:John Jacob Astor,who reaped America’s first fortune, was a German immigrant. A man, lowborn and uneducated made his initial money by trading Indian furs. Therefore, Astor never learned to speak English properly. He carried on his business to the end in an accent which was redolent of the Hamburg gutters.